Students keep on asking me how to write emails. Well after investigating for a while I think I´m able to help you here.
The basic rule is: “brevity is the soul of wit” this means that being concise is the best option. Or just remember this rule: “Keep it nice short and sweet”.
Read about 10 tips for writing business emails.
Email writing tips
Writing Business Letters
Take a look at them and tell me what you think.